Twilight zone?

urm.. aku bce twilight.. serius shit i don know why ppl luv this book..

hehe.. mula la ni nk mberi komen2.. lolx..

ekceli aku bru bce 3/4 buku tu.. arini insyaAllah abeh kot..

1st of all.. aku bce ats dua sbb.. 1st sb mne2 pegi, org ckp psl die.. its a trend.. juz like harry potter yg glamer buku n muvi.. so.. aku sje nk test buku die dlu.. sb slalu nyer buku akn lbh best dr muvi..
2nd sb hafiz prnh ckp bl die bce buku tu, he said, myb mcm tu la pmikiran aku (s a girl thadap llk yg die suke).. err.. ok.. so.. i wonder abt that.. tp d sbb kn bz.. n buku tu lak asik abeh stok jek kt kdai buku popular kt bntulu, so, i wait until i kt mlk.. voila.. buku dh de dpn mata.. aku bce r..

bl aku bce.. bpe byk kali aku nk tlelap.. busan bah.. ok2.. aku bce buku sblum tdo.. myb i'm too tired sb siang2 byk bnda aku wt.. tp.. dlu aku bce harry potter ke da vinci code ke, xde lak gtu.. smpai nk tsepuk buku tu kt muka aku.. mcm bce nota kuliah jek.. haha.. busan2..

ade word yg repetitive n redundance dlm cite ni.. duh.. xbest2.. especially dialogs..

ade word yg die gune kn yg bl aku nmpk, i said in my heart 'mcmane la bdk kecik or bdk yg x phm sgt BI bce?'.. the word is too complicated.. ekceli boleh klo die nk gune bombastic word but, olahan sentence slps tu harus la baik so that readers understand what the author tried to convey..

half of the book, plot x bkembang dgn baik.. borink.. its all abt home with charlie.. how bella was totally a babe around many guys kt tmpt bru (mcm x perlu pon watak2 tu sbnrnya..).. actually byk jek bnda leh crita tp die waste time cite psl unimportant things..

since when she knows that edward is truely a vampire?? i mean b4 edward bgtau die sndri.. none.. its juz an assumption kn? assumption yg d buat lps being told by one of the guy yg die jumpa yg crita psl myth village tu.. (again.. llk.. kt village tu byk llk ke.. xphm btul aku..).. plus, aku rse bella x ptt menerima je myth tu.. ptt die ade conflict ngn dr die sndri.. nk2 lg llk yg encem, mnarik phatian die d katakn is a vampire?? buat la observation, find the truth.. the story will b more exciting.. hey.. u r a town girl.. ptt nyer crita psl myth2 ni msuk tlinga kiri, kuar tlinga kanan je.. aiyoyo..

aku lak over.. haha.. apa2 pon lps bce half, bru la ade pkembangan plot.. sb edward dh bwk die jumpa family die.. bru smgt ckit aku nk bce.. klo x, watak bella tu is too shallow for me.. edward kn slalu ckp yg die xleh nk bce minda bella.. duh.. x complicated pon watak bella.. huhu..

biau r aku jd author die.. meh aku draft out what shud be happening dkt 1st half of the book.. :p

bella dtg ke village tu..

she made new frens (which most of it was girl.. guy fren shud b 1 or 2.. not more, cukup dh tu.. n they shudnt have feelings towards her.. yg ade feeling, sorg je, dh cukup utk m'jeleskn edward)

she met with edward.. a guy yg slalu pndg die dgn pndgn yg mnakotkn.. (coz edward kt bella taste good kn.. of coz la he feel like eating her..)

she tried her best to fit in.. including with edward.. but edward always turn he down.. n she thinks more abt edward than anybody else.. thats what make her interested in edward more..

she will do observation but not so obsess coz she gotta do sumthg else.. juz a bit of observation.. on way he talks (of coz she will notice abt his smile).. way he interact with ppl (she will notice abt his coldness n what make he behave like that).. n the place that she always notice he's there.. i know.. dlm buku, die slalu kt klas or kt kafe kn.. but klo aku, aku x wt la kt tmpt2 tu.. coz x de kekuatan r jumpa kt tmpt2 tu.. cliche sgt utk bdk sekolah yg biasa.. the prob is, mreka adalah luar biasa, so, kne la tmpt2 yg luar biasa.. cth nye, tepi utan ke.. or any other place yg ckup utk bella wonder npe die ke ctu..

n then, evrytime kt umah, bella akn memikir kn a bit about edward b4 nk tdo.. that will mengukuhkn npe she was alwiz sleep talking.. mcm aku r.. adik aku ckp aku slalu gak merapu dlm tdo.. saying name.. huhu.. ok.. but not words like 'i luv u' coz its too early utk bella fall in luv with edward..

n then sum1 told her abt the myth.. this sum1 shud be the elder of the village (x kire la jiran ke.. makcik yg mcm witch2 ckit ke..) or her closest fren.. not sum kind of guy yg ttb showed up juz like in the book.. (too many character will make the story look messy.. unless evry character is strongly potrayed..) this will make bella want to find out more abt edward..

then 1 day, d sbb kn myth n observation yg die wt, die nk find out the truth.. n then, kantoi.. alaleng.. haha.. n then, edward will explain to her.. show her things that she doesnt even know that it existed during this chpter of kebenaran.. n he will say abt his feelings towards bella too.. n bella shud know abt his seriousness.. there's no need for edward utk keep on saying abt the seriousness or that he doesnt get mad with bella on any occasion juz like in the book.. huhu. oo.. lupa la plak.. bella shud at least show that she's shocked bl edward show his true form.. at that time, edward shud hold her hands and convince her that she will b alrite.. dont be scare..

n then, klo nk start mushy2, bru la boley sb dh start bcinta kn.. b4 that, he has to show his sweetness 1st la.. cth nye bl dh anto bella blk umah, he was hanging upside down at a tree sblh blk bella ke (utk tgk bella tdo).. ha.. seram ckit.. haha.. ha.. klo nk interprame kn pokok tu, kne la cite ckit psl pokok tu mse pmulaan cite.. bru nmpk kpentingan pokok tu..

the end..

itu shj olahan sy utk 1st half buku tu.. oleh kerana buku tu dh start bkembang, sy m'respect crita seterusnya.. huhu.. adik aku kata buku 1 n 3 x best.. 2 n 4 yg best.. or is it 1 n 4, 2 n 3? haha.. ntah r.. tp yg 2nd book adek aku kt best.. nti nk bce r klo ade mse.. hehe..

ok la.. itu shj.. punya la pnjg komen.. isk2..